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Writing: Fix the most common Band 5 mistakes
Eight small mistakes that examiners see in almost every Band 5 essay. Learn to spot and correct them, then repair a whole paragraph.
The eight mistakes
| Mistake | Wrong | Right |
|---|---|---|
| Subject–verb agreement | Many people think… | |
| Although… but | Although it is cheap, (no but)… | |
| In nowadays | Nowadays, … / These days, … | |
| Double comparative | healthier / more healthy (not both) | |
| discuss about | discuss this | |
| Wrong word form | It is very beneficial. | |
| affect / effect | a negative effect (noun); it affects (verb) | |
| Joining sentences with a comma | Buses are cheap, so people use them. |
How to check your work
Save three minutes at the end of the test. Read only for these mistakes. You'll find more than you expect.
Questions 1–8
Is each sentence correct or incorrect?
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Many students thinks that homework is too difficult.
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Although the city is crowded, many people want to live there.
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Although public transport is cheap, but many people prefer cars.
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In nowadays, technology is everywhere.
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This essay will discuss the advantages of online learning.
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Cycling is more healthier than driving.
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Children who play sport tend to sleep better.
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Pollution has a serious affect on our health.
Questions 9–13
Write the correct form of the word in brackets.
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Regular exercise is very for your health. (benefit)
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The government to build more schools. (need)
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There are many who cannot read. (child)
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People who in cities often feel stressed. (live)
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This is the solution of all. (good)
Your turn: repair a paragraph
This paragraph has seven mistakes from the table. Rewrite it correctly.
Check your answer
Model answer
Nowadays, many people think that cars are the main problem in big cities. Although cars are useful, they cause a lot of pollution. The government should make public transport cheaper, so that more people will use it.